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Papillon
Last Entry: Oct 14, 2009, 16:43
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Feb 27, 08, 11:09
Piano My Life

Current Mood: In a rush^^
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­­Piano My Life...­

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­­If you will,­

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­­I shall ask you to piano my life,­

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­­Playing a melody so sentimental,­

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­­Echoing ever so softly in my heart,­

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­­Echoing every moment, every night , every day…­

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­­You just piano my life,­

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­­The white keys ….­

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­­So peaceful, so ordinary,­

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­­The black keys….­

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­­So mysterious, so melodious,­

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­­Ever so lightly your fingers dance on the keyboards,­

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­­Coloring the melody with the essence of life…­

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­­White keys and black keys…­

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­­So different yet so compatible,­

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­­So like you, so like me….­

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­­Without white,­ ­­without black…­

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­­This song is incomplete…­

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­­Thanks for pianoing my life,­

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­­I just knew that in this life,­

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­­I couldn’t have asked for more…­

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­­All I ask of you is….­

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­­Piano my life with the melody of life….­

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­­One that may bring me home...to you...­

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­­This poem was written out of boredom from reading the test book till I fell asleep­­....I decided to get away for a while from the book I was reading and write up something. Apparently, that is how this poem comes about....­
­­Later in the night, I bumped into Ann and showed her my poem, she however mentioned that this poem is unlike ­ any of my usual style in poem writing and it reminds her of the movie "The Notebook". I decided to post this poem as a dedication for our friendship, for those who came into my life and have been staying with me still, I appreciate it very much...hope you all may enjoy it. ­
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Comments

Feb 27, 2008
xeRox
Awww so sweet...you always manage to capture the raw essence of emotions. Keep it up!

Take care!
Apr 6, 2008
Jane
Thanks!I'll sure keep it up!Have a great day ahead!

Feb 27, 2008
georgewrit
Very good, Jane.  If this is what comes out from boredom, you should try to be bored more often.  You are great, my dear.  Good luck to you and keep up the good work.
Apr 6, 2008
Jane
LOL...of course,i'll find something to bore myself just to come up with something fresh for my poetry,dont worry about it!Thanks for commenting and may you have great day ahead!

Feb 28, 2008
MagikGypsy
Hmmm didn't know that you would have mentioned our little chat. Will sent the book as soon as I find out which box it is in. I enjoyed this poem as it is different from your others. Wonderful words as usual. Sorry can't  say anything bad about it.

Be happy. Thanks for your friendship.

Be well loved.


Apr 6, 2008
Jane
Yeah,I did remember our conversation most vividly and your comments and advices are most invaluable for me and I'll take it with me!Thanks for everything.Please take care!

Mar 2, 2008
-LOoKiE-
eh this is just unbelieavable, you managed to be creative  during on your boredom...hehe - what a magical moment. my dear, aww lovely verse, you are just so sweet, happy to see you here again. thank you for our friendship too. You are very awesome person. I like you a lot. Cheers.
Apr 6, 2008
Jane
You are sweet too.LOL.Thanks for the compliments and may you have a great day ahead!Take care and keep me posted!


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